I have attached my 1st draft to my Analysis Essay below:
When my professor looked over my draft, she said that I was summarizing too much and there was not enough of analyzing.
Can you add stuff/ fix my essay to make it more like an Analysis.
Make sure these questions are answered in the analysis essay:
- How does the author try to interest the reader?
- Do the support and evidence seem adequate? Is the support convincing to the reader? Does the evidence actually prove the point the author is trying to make?
- Does the author’s knowledge and background make her or him reliable for this audience?
- How does the author interest the audience? Does she or he make the reader want to know more?
Here is the video that I did my analysis essay on: https://www.ted.com/talks/kelly_mcgonigal_how_to_m…
Change and do whatever you need to do to make my Analysis essay better. 🙂