Please read the paper correct the mistakes(grammar, analysis, organize the paragraphs.) I will write the instruction of the teacher follow it.
The Final Draft should be a polished essay (1200-1400 words) that (a) educates an audience of non-engaged stakeholders about the issue or topic; (b) engages the audience by convincing them that they should care about this issue or topic; and (c) empowers the audience to take action in some way.
This draft should include a thesis, all major points, evidence to support these points (including in-text citations from appropriate sources), and a Works Cited page. The document should be free of organizational, grammar, and style errors and should follow proper structure both in formatting the paper and citing sources.